Saturday, November 28, 2009

The beginning of the new tale

Sooo, I've started it. My new story has its first few hundred odd words, and I think I'm going to have some fun with this one.

The first few lines are:

The half of my car that was left looked perfectly natural propped against the wall. As if I could peer round the gate post and see the rest of it sticking out the other side. The snag was I knew this was all there was. I’d met Simon, my boyfriend, pushing the back half into the barn as I cycled into the yard.

If any of you want to follow its progress, you can find it here

Let me know what you think. I really value opinion and feedback, and by the way, this opening incident was something that really happened, although of course, I am fictionalising the people and the story in general.I haven't quite finished working out the plot, but I didn't with Arie either. A lot of it just evolved, so I'm hoping this one will too. It's great to be starting a new project!

4 comments:

  1. I left comment on said blog...

    It's funny already!

    xx

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  2. Thanks Dale! I'm really chuffed you have been the first one to read it! xx

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  3. Oh, joy, another Val story to enjoy. I have a few chores and errands to run here after breakfast, and then I will allow myself to savour the new tale. I've also got a new chapter of EG to post today, as this head cold has given me lots of creative time as I lay in bed waiting for my head to explode.

    xx
    AM

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  4. and the next few lines are...

    Sorry, Val, I couldn't resist!
    Just me looking forward to your next installment.

    Hope you have a good weekend - mine is just starting, but you are well into yours by now!

    xx

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